TikTok One Creators Video #2 Storyboard

Creators Storyboard

Creators Video #2 分镜

以下内容已按需求 PDF 的脚本原文回填。PDF 只给了 beat 结构，没有逐镜秒数，所以时间列暂按 Beat 标记，不额外编造时长。

来源：Creators Video #2 / SCRIPT — TRT: 50s / NARRATION + COPY CARDS / VISUALS + UI DIRECTION。

镜头	16:9 画面	时间	旁白 / 屏幕文案	画面内容	Christina Mbuyi 反馈	黄炎奇添反馈
01		Beat 1	You Love Creating VO: You want to create content that people love... ALT: CREATE	画面在简洁背景中开启——来自素材库/品牌审核通过的 UGC 视频窗口（如跳舞、做饭等创作者内容）以整齐网格形式滑入画面。在其后方，一行文案在空间中不断复制扩散，形成背景层次：CREATE。	For the intro scene with the word “create,” right now the “CR” starts at the end of the slide and “EATE” wraps to the beginning, which splits the word visually. Could we adjust it so the full word is visible and reads cleanly across the frame? 在开场这个带有 “create” 字样的画面里，现在 “CR” 出现在画面末尾，而 “EATE” 又换到了开头，这样视觉上把单词拆开了。能不能调整一下，让整个单词都完整显示，并且在画面中读起来更顺畅清晰？	Need to add monetization story here. 这里需要加上“变现”这层表达。 "You want to create content that people love and get paid for it...." "You want to create content that people love and get paid for it...."
02		Beat 2	But the Admin Adds Up VO: ...not get stuck doing with all the busywork. Luckily,...	在网格画面之上，胶囊式文案提示接连弹出，逐渐让屏幕变得拥挤杂乱：Negotiating · Prospecting · Chasing Approvals · Tracking Deadlines · Follow-Ups。当这种视觉上的嘈杂感堆积到顶点时，画面会出现一个轻微的卡顿／故障感特效。	For the slide with the text bubbles (follow-up, negotiation, tracking deals, etc.), the text is currently angled/sideways, which makes it feel a bit harder to read. Could we keep the text straight instead? I think it’ll still feel overwhelming but be more visually clear. 这页里那些文字气泡（follow-up、negotiation、tracking deals 等）目前是倾斜/侧着放的，所以读起来有点费劲。能不能把文字保持为正向排布？我觉得这样依然能传达那种“信息很多、很压迫”的感觉，但视觉上会更清楚。	Simplify a little to flow better... 稍微简化一点，让整体更顺一些…… "not drown in busywork." "not drown in busywork."
03		Beats 3-4	TikTok One Brings Collabs to You VO: ...there’s TikTok One Creator Marketplace: a hub in TikTok Studio designed to simplify partnerships. ALT: TikTok One Tailors Brands to You	这些胶囊式提示突然被“磁力”吸引至屏幕中央，并在一次闪光中全部消失。闪光过后，一个干净的核心界面出现——位于 TikTok Studio 内的 Creator Marketplace UI 面板，边缘带有微微发光的效果。	-	-
04		Beat 5	One Place For All Your Deals VO: All your brand deals live here.	在 Creator Marketplace 界面之上，多张「Deal」卡片依次滑入，整齐堆叠成一组。	-	-
05		Beat 6	Get matched with brands that fit your niche VO: No cold DMs, the right collabs come to you. ALT: The right brands, right here	这组 Opportunity 卡片从堆叠状态展开为横向轮播结构。画面从左向右滚动，最终停留在一张发光的核心（Hero）Deal 卡片上。	-	-
06		Beat 7	Grow Your Rewards VO: Every step lives in a central hub... ALT: More Rewards, More Control	Deal 卡片滑出画面，取而代之的是一组 Benefit 卡片依次滑入，并在画面中央逐个停留短暂强调：Apply to Opportunities / Get Discovered by Brands / Unlock Rewards from What You've Already Created。随后最后一张卡片翻转，展示出一个「Rewards」标签，该标签不断复制扩展，铺满整个屏幕形成一面墙。	This slide feels a bit off from the rest of the color scheme. Could we adjust the background to black (or another color that matches the palette from the other slides) so it feels more cohesive with the overall look? 这页的颜色看起来和其他页面的整体配色有点脱节。能不能把背景改成黑色，或者换成另一种更贴近前面页面调色板的颜色，这样整体观感会更统一？	Should be 3 cards, one with each of the bullet point on it, no headlines "Dear, Benefit, Unlock, Rewards." 这里应该是 3 张卡片，每张卡片分别对应一个 bullet point，不要再加像 "Dear, Benefit, Unlock, Rewards." 这样的标题。
07		Beat 8	Less Back-and-Forth VO: .. from initial outreach to final approval.	整面「Rewards」标签墙向下坠落并退出画面。随后，一个动画化的时间轴卡片出现：Opportunity → Apply → Approval → Deadline → Submission。每个节点旁依次出现对勾标记，逐步完成流程状态。其中「Deadline」会翻转转化为一个日历图标。	-	Approval should be at the very end. Approval 应该放在最最后面。 "Opportunity -> Confirmation -> Deadline -> Submission -> Approval" 改成："Opportunity -> Confirmation -> Deadline -> Submission -> Approval" Honestly, deadline in the middle looks a bit weird too. 说实话，deadline 放在中间看起来也有点奇怪。
08		Beat 9	Everything in One Place VO: Track it here, so nothing falls through the cracks...	时间轴收缩合并，转化为一张单独的「Deal」卡片。在该卡片下方，多个标签模块滑出并排列对齐，边缘带有发光效果：Deliverables · Due Date · Requirements · Submission。	-	-
09		Beat 10	On Time, Every Time. VO: ...including your rewards!	这些标签全部滑出画面。随后，一个 9:16 的界面边框轮廓出现，内部显示文字「APPROVED」。该界面边框随即翻转，露出一个带有对勾的 Rewards 确认徽章。	-	9x16 means vertical screen. 9x16 就是竖屏。 It should show us as the creator video gets approved, and ready to go live. 这里应该展示创作者视频已经通过审批，并且准备上线的状态。
10		Beat 11	From Collabs to Real Results. VO: TikTok One keeps your brand deals organized in one place...	该界面框滑出屏幕。一条工作流程带横向展开，标签依次被点亮并高亮显示：Discover → Apply → Deliver → Rewards。随后，一条箭头从「Rewards」延伸出去，最终落在一个发光的终点标签上：→ More Creation。	-	Creators don't care about results. Maybe we say rewards? 创作者并不会太在意 “results” 这个说法。也许我们可以改成 “rewards”？ How is this different from the timeline above? 这里和上面的 timeline 有什么区别？
11		Beat 12	More Time Creating. VO: ...so you can get back to doing your thing.	工作流程带滑出屏幕，开场中的胶囊式管理提示（Negotiating · Prospecting · Follow-Ups）再次滑入画面。随后，这些标签上依次出现三个对勾标记，接着整体滑出，画面切回开头的创作者内容视频片段。	-	-
12		Beat 13	You Create. TikTok One Handles the Rest. COPY CARD: You Create. TikTok One Handles the Rest.	在干净的结尾画面中，Creator Marketplace 面板再次回到屏幕中央，并带有轻微的发光效果。下方以加粗文字形式出现 TikTok One 的字标，画面停留收尾。	-	-